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    Darth Vectivus
    Darth Vectivus
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    Post  Darth Vectivus Sun Oct 11, 2009 2:36 pm

    When the Order of the Sith starts on its march,
    Dark Lord of the Sith Krayt shall lead them on the hunt.
    Weilding lightsabers and using the force,
    Nothing shall stop the Sith from bringing destruction to the Universe.

    Born with fiery hearts and a passion to destroy,
    The Sith are a mighty organization that won't be good to explore.
    Since their hatred runs deep to the core,
    Your life will only last but a few seconds more.

    So build your armies and defenses well,
    Or you'll just burn easier in fiery hell.
    So join the Dark Tide and help it swell,
    Or stay there and lose everything you own and life as well.


    -Darth Vectivus

    Thought of writing this yesterday.
    No plagiarism either!
    Any suggestions to make it better before posting somewhere else (External Page?) please post comments here.


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    Darth Millennial
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    Post  Darth Millennial Sun Oct 11, 2009 6:30 pm

    Well, a bit too goofy and canny if you ask me. Not Sith-like enough, sounds more like some kind of Disney song.
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    Dark Lady Eclipsa
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    Post  Dark Lady Eclipsa Mon Oct 12, 2009 10:55 am

    in my opinion it is pretty good. Very Happy
    is it the first time you wrote a poem?
    try some more Smile
    darth millennial, have you read/wrote a nice one?
    Najus
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    Post  Najus Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:58 pm

    I've been trying to write an inspirational(us)/demotivational(them) poem for a while now.
    It's actually extremely difficult!
    Nice job Darth Vectivus.
    Darth Millennial
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    Post  Darth Millennial Mon Oct 12, 2009 9:39 pm

    I've got a Sith inspirational poem. It is actually the lyrics of a psycho-trance soundtrack Navras

    From delusion lead me to truth
    From darkness lead me to light
    From death lead me to immortality.

    Let there be peace everywhere

    When the five senses and the mind are still,
    and reason itself rests in silence,
    then begins the Path supreme

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