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    bit of something i did a long time ago...

    maxy
    maxy


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    Join date : 2009-10-31

    bit of something i did a long time ago... Empty bit of something i did a long time ago...

    Post  maxy Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:27 am

    i wrote this using some of the guys in my alli
    was fun but i couldnt get enough info together to keep the story alive
    so enjoy...

    Prologue


    Fleet Commander Maximilian Holt was in the control room of his newest and

    only destroyer looking out through the view fields and across the orderly fleet

    of warships he commanded. He was reminiscing back to the old days when you

    could command billions of ships without needing to build each and everyone

    with the resources you pillaged from nearby planets.


    He remembered back to when he commanded the greatest fleet of ships anyone

    had ever seen. Over a stretch of only a few weeks in that old universe he had

    gone from a lowly cruiser captain to the leader of the most powerful fleet in the

    universe. Back in those days it was not a matter of strategy or tactics that won

    battles but rather the skill you had in manipulating the wormholes that he and

    his fellow pirates had discovered while attempting to cause ships to travel

    faster than light using state of the art warp drives their technicians had

    invented only days before. On the first attempt his fleet came out of warp with

    twice the ships that had entered the wormhole. When he disclosed this to his

    fellows he was branded as a liar.

    "FL-COMM. maxy. FL-COMM. maxy" Shouted a lieutenant from lower on the

    ATK-COM deck. Jolted out of his revelry, he snapped his attention back the the

    view fields and toward the up coming battle. Out in front of him was the fleets

    of his greatest enemies; the atos, a group of carmainan spice addicts who had

    been raiding his hidden planets for the rare spice...

    (to be continued)

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