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    maxy
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    Post  maxy Sun Nov 01, 2009 10:25 pm

    ive wanted to write a story like this for a while
    its short(ish) and ill have to write it in phases so please comment ill will just edit the original post...

    THE DARKSIDE


    affraid

    in the sith chapel on [tarnoriss VI] (unknown regions) 3912By

    ""sarniss, sarniss, umalla kar"
    "sith, sith, we have come"

    "ena derk sindak sarniss, huma noko, oya"

    "your power of the darkside... even the sith lords fear you, my lord"

    darth karodium: "slave... you sense the darkside in this place"

    "you sense the fear, the hate, the strength..."

    darth karodium: "its power consumes you, yet you do not fight?"

    "and even you, you do not know the darkside.. the true darkside"


    revan: "lord, i have come to destroy your power..."

    darth karodium: "i find you amusing"

    "you have defeated the jedi, curbed the power of the darkside to your will, and found the ancient starforge"
    "you know more of the force than any that has come before you and you have more power than any that has come before you"

    revan: "i have also defeated your sith and i have desecrated your temple"

    darth karodium: "you feel that you are the greatest force-ling to ever weild the darkside?"

    revan: "that is why i am here to destroy you"

    darth karodium: "meet the true force!!!"
    maxy
    maxy


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    Post  maxy Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:56 pm

    galactic senate building 167ABy

    darth focuin unikr and the nameless one...

    the nameless one "master"

    darth focuin unikr "focfocfoc... arrrr, serm, jisss piniss"

    the nameless one "yes master"


    later that day galactic senate floor 167ABy

    jonh var borene leader of the deep galaxy exploration movement talks about the merits of further exploration into the unknown regions...

    "in my vary first excursions into the unknown regions i found a system of planets once inhabited by creatures that appear to be force sensitive"

    jedi master "do you know what kind of force they used?"

    jonh "we arent sure, our funding was cut and it looked to only be a colony or an out post"

    senate chair member jori teiilic'k "you want us to fund you three million credits so you can go to some forgotten colony of some anchent race which we have never heard of?"

    jonh "no, because i think that these people might hold the secret to the early events of the galaxy before the old republic and maybe even before the jedi order"

    jori "understandable... the senate will fund you 1.2million credits for fuel and research equipment, which ship bay will your ship be at?"

    jonh "ship docking bay de2743 A-

    *explosion above*

    with everyone looking up at the roof and the explosion no one noticed that a lean, short, and unobtrusive man had kidnaped jonh var borene...

    TBC...

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