Sarge's crazy, but maybe good idea

i have wanted to be a writer for a very long time in my life. and i thought i might share some stuff with you guys since you are my friends. so, if i wrote some sci fi short stories and posted them on the forums, would you guys read them? its just something fun i thought i could do. so, vote yes or no and if i get enough yes answers then ill share something with you guys.

strange... but i think its acceptable. just make the stories more pro-sith.

im always alittle strange, XD and will do for the pro-sith thing

Ill read them as long as they turn out good

And if you want I will make you a section of the forum for stories... so that you can post your own topic for each new story so you can just post to add more on or we can post to comment on them ect...

wow, 8 yes's and 0 no's, i thought someone would have called me a retard by now XD

I love zero hour hope you will write more chapters.

the 1st story has been posted, Zero Hour is the title

alright guys the 1st part of Zero Hour is complete. More will be on the way, but the incident that will jump start Payton's journey to the Dark Side has begun. (yes im purposely making it sound over dramatic)

Wicked story Sarge, I don't know much about zero hour, that was a great storyline. Not too well on the language and elaboration though. Just a thought, would you allow me to do a personal rendition of your story? I'll stick to your storyline, but written in a different manner.

sorry about the elaboration and stuff, it was early on in it and i finished it at like 2AM last night XD. once i get farther into it ill probably concentrate more on detail, and i still need to edit a few things so that its not confusing as hell. since the story is already out the time Zero Hour is when Onyx was destroyed and when the war between a group of space pirates and the remaining UDF began

Alright, i have to say i stand corrected on a few things, #1 Chapter 4 is on hold untill im happy with how Ch. 1-3 play out. i need to add a few details, i didnt add any descriptions to characters so noone knows how anyone looks or wtf. i never said what the cruiser was armed with so it gets confusing. nothing major will change unless i really need to, but im just going to be adding details untill it works well enough to leave it for the time being.

Ok, i added a few descriptions for the ships, as for people i am going to maybe add stuff later on, but if i find a spot where a description would go in well, i will add it.

Introduction of Cote D'azure to the story is going to be put on hold while I develop Payton and his crew's story abit. gonna see more on them, should have Ch. 4 done soon