Just alittle bit of information before I start the story. This story follows John Payton, an Ensign in the UDF, which stands for United Defense Federation. The UDF is the most dominant force in the known galaxy (which is far away from where the Sith are). Right now, they are in thier moment of peace. There is no fighting between armies anywhere that the UDF controls. Payton is currently onboard the UDFS Gettysburg under the command of Captain McTravis, his instructor from training. Soon, the UDF will learn the price of showing too much trust. Thier capital planet Onyx (no relation to my planet in Ogame) is the most successful port in the entire universe, but all good things dont last. I will keep you guessing on what Zero Hour is.
Chapter 1
Mess Hall of the UDFS Battleship Gettysburg.
1400 hours. 10 hours to Zero Hour.
Ensign John Payton stared at the chessboard, thinking about his next move. The captian and Payton always played chess durring down time, which there was alot of. The captain always said he was preparing Payton for when he commanded a ship. Payton couldn't be more excited to be able to command a ship of his own one day.
"Your move son." the captain informed him. The captain wasnt really John's father, but he refered to most of the men and women under his command that way. Payton looked up at the middle-aged captain and smirked, then looked back down at the chess board. "Alright, take forever, im getting a drink."
The captain got up and walked over to the vending machine. While the captain was away, Payton swaped a few pieces and then made his move. When the captain came back Payton looked at him and hid his smirk. "Your move, captain." he said.
"Did you cheat?" the captain asked.
"Of course not, why would i need to cheat." Payton replied.
"You better have. After all I taught you, you should know to take advantage of every weakness you see in an enemy. Noone plays fair when it comes to survival. So, did you?"
Payton was about to reply when James O'Brian, the ship's navigator, called the captain over the intercom. "Cap'n, we have arrived at our destinatoin, we have 2 space pirate ships on the edge of our firing range, we need you here."
"Give us five minutes." The captain said.
"Roger that, O'Brian out."
Payton and McTravis walked to the bridge of the battleship in silence. When they arrived the captain shouted a few orders the the soldiers who responded with a "Yes, sir."
"Payton, get on weapon controls and heat up our cannons." the captain ordered.
Payton responed, "Aye, sir."
"Petty Officer Thomson," the captain said to the young woman who was thier communications operator. "send the enemy ships a warning message."
"Aye s-" before she could finish her sentence a warning came on.
"They've opened fire!" O'Brian shouted. "Two missiles coming at us."
"O'Brian, evasive maneuvers, dodge those Missiles. Payton, open fire with the long range cannon."
Both men shouted "Aye sir!" The ship rumbled abit as the engines fired up. Then Payton fired two shots from the ships long range artillary cannon. Then a loud "Hooyah!" from O'Brian.
"Did i get 'em?" Payton asked."
"Nailed thier asses, nice shot Payton." O'Brian said. Then Payton got a "well done" and "good job" from most of the crew members on the bridge. Then The captain walked up to Payton.
"You all did a great job, but command is giving me new orders. They are sending a cruiser which you are going to get on and keep an eye on this area. Payton, you'll be incharge" he announced
"But, Sir, I'm only an ensign." Payton replied. The captain gave him a smirk and said to him.
"you've been promoted." Then the captain handed him the single silver bar insigna of a Lieutenant Junior Grade.
"Sir, are you sure about this? I don't think i'll be able to command a ship." Payton replied.
"Son, you dream was to lead a ship of your own wasn't it? This is your chance. Take it."
Payton hesitated, "Alright," he finally said, "I'll do it."
After a 2 hour long wait, the group of 3 boarded a new unnamed cruiser ship and too thier stations. The group relaxed abit thinking that the day's work was over, and that they had nothing to worry about. They would wait for the captain to return and then they would go home for some rest and relaxation. For the next 3 and a half hours the group relaxed and talked to pass the time. Untill O'Brian said, "sir, there are a few objects coming for us."
Payton sat up in the captain's chair and said, "Alright, lets see whats going on." Payton typed a few commands on his console and looked at the screen which showed the locations of a few small fighters. "Damn pirates."
"Sir, more incoming." O'Brian said. Suddenly more and more came on to the screen. "Shit! There's hundreds of them!" Payton stared at the screen in disbelief. He had never seen so many ships in one spot. Hundreds of cruisers, fighters, and battleships. They were heavily outnumbered, it left Payton only one choice.
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Chapter 1
Mess Hall of the UDFS Battleship Gettysburg.
1400 hours. 10 hours to Zero Hour.
Ensign John Payton stared at the chessboard, thinking about his next move. The captian and Payton always played chess durring down time, which there was alot of. The captain always said he was preparing Payton for when he commanded a ship. Payton couldn't be more excited to be able to command a ship of his own one day.
"Your move son." the captain informed him. The captain wasnt really John's father, but he refered to most of the men and women under his command that way. Payton looked up at the middle-aged captain and smirked, then looked back down at the chess board. "Alright, take forever, im getting a drink."
The captain got up and walked over to the vending machine. While the captain was away, Payton swaped a few pieces and then made his move. When the captain came back Payton looked at him and hid his smirk. "Your move, captain." he said.
"Did you cheat?" the captain asked.
"Of course not, why would i need to cheat." Payton replied.
"You better have. After all I taught you, you should know to take advantage of every weakness you see in an enemy. Noone plays fair when it comes to survival. So, did you?"
Payton was about to reply when James O'Brian, the ship's navigator, called the captain over the intercom. "Cap'n, we have arrived at our destinatoin, we have 2 space pirate ships on the edge of our firing range, we need you here."
"Give us five minutes." The captain said.
"Roger that, O'Brian out."
Payton and McTravis walked to the bridge of the battleship in silence. When they arrived the captain shouted a few orders the the soldiers who responded with a "Yes, sir."
"Payton, get on weapon controls and heat up our cannons." the captain ordered.
Payton responed, "Aye, sir."
"Petty Officer Thomson," the captain said to the young woman who was thier communications operator. "send the enemy ships a warning message."
"Aye s-" before she could finish her sentence a warning came on.
"They've opened fire!" O'Brian shouted. "Two missiles coming at us."
"O'Brian, evasive maneuvers, dodge those Missiles. Payton, open fire with the long range cannon."
Both men shouted "Aye sir!" The ship rumbled abit as the engines fired up. Then Payton fired two shots from the ships long range artillary cannon. Then a loud "Hooyah!" from O'Brian.
"Did i get 'em?" Payton asked."
"Nailed thier asses, nice shot Payton." O'Brian said. Then Payton got a "well done" and "good job" from most of the crew members on the bridge. Then The captain walked up to Payton.
"You all did a great job, but command is giving me new orders. They are sending a cruiser which you are going to get on and keep an eye on this area. Payton, you'll be incharge" he announced
"But, Sir, I'm only an ensign." Payton replied. The captain gave him a smirk and said to him.
"you've been promoted." Then the captain handed him the single silver bar insigna of a Lieutenant Junior Grade.
"Sir, are you sure about this? I don't think i'll be able to command a ship." Payton replied.
"Son, you dream was to lead a ship of your own wasn't it? This is your chance. Take it."
Payton hesitated, "Alright," he finally said, "I'll do it."
After a 2 hour long wait, the group of 3 boarded a new unnamed cruiser ship and too thier stations. The group relaxed abit thinking that the day's work was over, and that they had nothing to worry about. They would wait for the captain to return and then they would go home for some rest and relaxation. For the next 3 and a half hours the group relaxed and talked to pass the time. Untill O'Brian said, "sir, there are a few objects coming for us."
Payton sat up in the captain's chair and said, "Alright, lets see whats going on." Payton typed a few commands on his console and looked at the screen which showed the locations of a few small fighters. "Damn pirates."
"Sir, more incoming." O'Brian said. Suddenly more and more came on to the screen. "Shit! There's hundreds of them!" Payton stared at the screen in disbelief. He had never seen so many ships in one spot. Hundreds of cruisers, fighters, and battleships. They were heavily outnumbered, it left Payton only one choice.
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